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May 10, 2010 | 4:31 PM EDT
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3.4 MB
3 min 44 sec
3.43 / 5.00

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Rated 3.43 / 5 stars
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Electronic - Techno

Author Comments

I really like the main melody in this one, put quite a bit of detail into it, it'll probably get more polished at some point, but for now this is the finished product.

All comments and reviews are welcome and are greatly appreciated.

8/3/10, this and 5 other of my songs got a top 30:3
Thank you everyone for your support^^



Rated 5 / 5 stars


I likes it. Not much more that I have to say. lol.
Good job


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Daydream-Anatomy responds:



Rated 4 / 5 stars

My thoughts...

Beat: 19/20 - There was nothing missing in terms of beat and rhythm. Consider, however, making the bass more defined throughout most of the song, and perhaps allowing some segments to be more legato.

Melody: 15/20 - The song sounds good, but your melody isn't very profound. The song as a whole sounds more like a backdrop for a melody that isn't quite there.

Tone: 14/20 - Another big thing I noticed is how little the tone varies. It changes rhythm every once in a while, which is good, but the tone and overall sound hardly changes. I found myself quickly bored of it.

Transitions: 18/20 - Nothing is wrong with your transitions, but I feel it necessary to mention how welcome a drastic change in volume during transitions would be. The volume is too consistent for my liking.

Ending: 10/20 - You classified this as a song, not a loop, which surprised me. If it had been designated a loop, i could understand the lack of climax at the end. With endings like this one you could make a great loop, but as a song it seems weak.

Overall: 76/100 8/10 4/5 - Work on the tone and volume, add more general variance, and you could have a great loop on your hands :)

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Daydream-Anatomy responds:

Thanks for the critique:3

I'll be sure to take that into consideration when/if I finalize the song.


Rated 4 / 5 stars

You've got the right idea.

First I would like to say to all you haters; If you absolutely hate the song, fine, but if you do not have any sort of constructive criticism, or advice to give, then don't post please. This site is supposed to be a site for musicians to show off their stuff and get real reviews and advice to improve.

Now for your music: It's great! I can tell you enjoy making your music seeing as how every song so far seems to have a rather joyous overtone to it. I do feel that some of your songs may be a bit on the repetitive side, but over all they're good. They're not the best I've heard by far, but they're not even in the same ball park as the worst I've heard. In short, keep makin your music dude, and dont let anyone ruin it for you.

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Daydream-Anatomy responds:


really appreciate it:3


Rated 5 / 5 stars

Awesome Sauce!

This was a wonderful track you made,i loved that it had a lot of uplifting feel with a sense of epicness with the fast pace while keeping it tranquil which is one hell of a combination,overall i really enjoyed this track of yours and think it's one of your best. =)

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Daydream-Anatomy responds:

It's one of my fav songs out of the ones i've made.


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars


a bit to "happy happy joy joy" for me, (im a little bit emo :P) but still a great song!

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