It's a crime for sure
for things to be this bad xD screw you
But please, get fl studio, and put some drums in there
wheres the drums?
wheres the melody?
it doesn't flow, and its not a good rhythm.
i hate to sound like a jerk but come on.i don't
know where to start to make it better.
keep the same tempo and add some drums.use more than one sound or effect and keep it the same speed or something.
and most of all don't quit.