It was nice to hear. The middle was very out of tune with the drums and piano (0:37-0:43) but near the end it was excellent and i wish you would add on to the end at least. Good start but still a ways to go my friend.
I'm not sure...
I really liked the riff, it was a good riff, however I'm not sure if it was supposed to resemble Chaoz Fantasy by ParagonX9? Cause I didn't see it to be honest. And the drums were out of time with the music... well not so much out of time, they just didn't fit themusic, not at the beginning anyway, it did get better at the end. If you could take that awesome riff and add like a DnB or Trance beat to it then kudos to your my friend.
hey it's a MELODY remix!!!