Too much noise going on.

There is a bit of excess noise going on, so if you cut down a bit on that for the drum set, it's good because I can barely hear much else. I added you to faved artists and await the track.

Cool

Nice sound industrial song. Some really nice layers going for you, everything compliments each other.

If your going to be taking this seriously, one of the main floors for me as a listener, is the clipping, it comes when the crash comes in.

You can work on making the drums sound clearer, more character, cause they are a very nice aspect of the song. In fact if you could work on the clarity of each separate sound, this would make it awesome.

I don't think there are many flaws with the structure of the song.

As a listener, seeing that this is a demo, i'll come back and check it when the full version is out.

Good job dude