I can hear heaps of great sounds here. The drums are not too loud IMO. Its DnB, its supposed to stand out :S. Also, I notice this is a liquid DnB mix, which means most of your sounds are near perfect for liquid. The only sound that worries me at the moment is the snare roll thing at 1:02. That has to be tweaked a bit.
Also, I can't see how this is related to pancakes in any way. No idea how you got that inspiration :P.
Great so far, and since it's a WIP, its a 10/10 :D.
Good luck finishing this.