Good start but...
I agree with Superstrings, this song has great potential, but to me it lacked a climax. As a matter of fact, I think it'd fit better under ambient better than Drum 'n Bass. The whole time I was expecting some spectacular climax where the drums finally stole the show and there was some kind of catchy hook behind it but that never happened. Decent song either way though, but I wish you weren't done with it. You put some kind of climax in there and this would be amazing.
It has a good potential, the beginning has a nice build up but after that there's no good drum patterns.
I think it would be awesome if. . .
If there was a silence at 0:27 for 2 seconds then the same rhythm would start again except more louder and more drums. Then the Piano part after that.
It's just the song is to quiet the whole time. Not it is bad, just because this song doesn't really suit a full continues low level.
I know how it feels when someone comments and gives you suggestions. You think "Can it be any better?" or like "That would sound dumb".
I found that suggestions really improves things. The song only seems good to the user that made the song, but that is because HE made it.
Nice job, though. I love the rhythms.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.