its a good song and all but its better when iits Red Jumpsuit Apparatus
Really good instrumentation. Fits well. Very interesting, more electro take on the song by RJA. Like DJ-Chilvan said, the vocals stand out too much. If you listen to the original song, you'll notice that the vocals are quite soft, and "flutter" on top of the instrumentation. Figuring out how to blend the vocals better will take this from a good mix to a great one.
I really liked this song, nice melody smooth and calm, but i still think you need a little more power in the song, boost it up with some lead, cut up the lyrics, so you have some left for the ending.
Really liked your lyrics, i would love to have one of your lyric recordings to make a remix of hehe...
Keep em' comin :D
Lyrics are great, no problem there.
Autotune is dank! I love it! But sometimes It gets too jumpy.
Beat is great, and the melody is wonderful!
The only criticism is that maybe you could master the lyrics better into the mix, so they don't "stand out" and sound more "fresh." I know mixing in lyrics are a bitch, but your local library should have books on it.
I'm giving you a 10 for overall excellence and originality. Your lyrics are just super wonderful.
10/10, 5/5, fav, DL
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.