Needs improvement. But good.
Okay so I just started listening to it... Kinda a weak intro, a little, well... boring. I guess with the sound on a higher volume it isn't so bad.
The drums were pretty good. The bass melody is pretty good, but the sound of the bass could use more energy. Yes that's it, try to put more energy into your songs. Pretty good though.
i was focusing on sound quality more than a good melody on this song, and i achived it.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.