All your stuff is pretty good. It'j just short and maybe lacking, but over all I like it.
At first it's a little short, i expect more afterwards. It never really pumped.
The drums didn't really fit the beat, but it was a nice attempt. The melody itself is pretty good.
I didn't expect that , anyways thank you for this nice review you really gave me an idea, I'll update this to a full song and I'll remove the STRANGE beats from it to be a scary and creepy song, thought......
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.