the best one you have attempted so far
its not bad except for the vocalist's style diddnt feel like it belonged in this song...
the guitars were ok, until this one part when the vocalist clashed with the lead. It got nasty.
the bass lines were actually pretty good. just please increase the bass in post production. that is incredibly important to the song's enjoyability.
but aside from complaints, this is definitely your best work so far.
oh... and please come up with a new ending... it sounded like crap with that twangy, bloated sound to end such a melodic song.