very nasty guitar and bass parts
it is worse than the others. The guitar/bass sections do not harmonize well.
it sounds like the vocalist doesn't know what he's doing until the very last few lines.
personally, it sounds like a mix between the musicality of the strokes and the stylization of Manchester Orchestra... which is not good imo...
please remember that song stability matters.
the rhythm is really off at some of the drum re-entrances, and its just messy...
again, work on musicality during preproduction, not post.