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Eden (Piano)

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The composement is named after that someone. Can't really tell if the piece is happy or sad.. But it sure is emotional, in a way. Feedbacks of all kinds are welcome! ;)

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Awkward Start

Agree a bit with the off-tune comments below, but they're not that bad. You *could* say they were intentional depending on what you were going for with the song (if you were going for a haunting kind of feel). They're mainly in the intro and then the replay at the end.

One thing that bothers me is the staggered feel of the notes. Sometimes it seems like the left hand is just playing the same note repeatedly for a while and the pace never really changes, but again, that really depends on what you were going for.

Nice try :)

Im no expert... or amateur lol but it seems to move between minor and major keys (especially 26-29) just doesn't seem right and are is your melody and harmony in the same key? Just doesn't seem to fit. Just my opinion though

uhhhhhhhhhh hmmmmm

is all i can say though some notes were out of tune and the intro dragged on without telling your listener that the song hadnt just begun and gotten stuck :/ tho after that it became quite beautiful and i would say it would fit in a love feel genre :')

Koriz responds:

Thanks alot ;) can you please point out where exactly were the off-tune notes? As for the opening, it's nothing I cannot improve ;) will take note of your highlights. Thanks again !

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Koriz
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Apr 30, 2010
4:59 PM EDT
Genre
Classical
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4.8 MB
2 min 6 sec

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