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Author Comments

Lyrics are as goes

I wake up in this place
and its eating me alive
They'll tell your somthing
but dont let them lie

Im blood drunk and on the path
Im gunna lay waste to all in sight
For now you are in my way
So get back to your grind

Stare into the mirror
Try and find somthing i like
I can hear you whisper
Can you feel the fears i hide

Creep into the corners
The outskirts of my mind
Climb the steps even higher
In the hope that you get
What you've come to find.

-Again still not really finished, just a rough draft.. Still looking on that final riff. Plus i have crap recording gear. Finally also found a perfect befitting name for the song. Newly Titled "Rat Park" look it up ;). tell me watcha think.


Okay, has potential

This has some good ideas, I love the sound, it's slow and grungy, but the vocals are WAY too loud. if you toned them down, cranked the bass a bit, it's get at least a 8 from me

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Bunk420 responds:

Thanks man. Yea the whole recording is really more of a template at the moment. kind of on the back burner. Just wanted a little feedback on it.

Blown right the hell away

Your voice has that 90's off key, nasty, pitchy vocals feel that fit's so well it's weird and the guitars and drums feel so right.

I really can't wait to hear what you can do. Amazing work, 5*

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Bunk420 responds:

*bow* Danke Schoen 8). Cant take all the credit though. Its actually my friends back in NY. Starting up a new band here with in the next few months hopfully. Been good friends for a long time. Only the lyrics and vocals melody are mine in that one. Ill try and specify more in the future as well.

pretty old school.

Reminds a little of Alice in Chains, and a bit of Tarbox Ramblers, nice

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Bunk420 responds:

Yea, AIC, SG, STP and many more lawl all my fav bands wrapped in a golden slice of zeppelin lol. ThanKS 8)

Sick dude!

This was really good, I'm surprised. I just decided to check your profile today and low and behold he's a fucking rock star, Ownage dudes!

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Bunk420 responds:

Thats awesome man. Im glad you like. This song is so far from being finished though. Lol. Once it is down with proper drums and another riff in that blank repetative part. Other then that thanks for the feed back 8).

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Credits & Info


4.22 / 5.00

Apr 29, 2010
3:17 AM EDT
File Info
3.8 MB
3 min 10 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.