This is amazing.
Hell, it reminds me of Waterflame's style.
Except you're a heavy metal writer, so this is even more awesome.
Didn't expect anything like this from a metal artist like you my good sir.
But who cares, cut the crap. As long as it's awesome, it doesnt matter who does it or how it's done.
i never known that the king of the heavies is attacking drum n bass and doing something new for a change. well its not best work yet but well i like it
Real tight stuff!
Really groovy bass, accompanied with a catchy melody and a tight, pumpy mix gets my attention here. I also like how you put the vocals into the background, rather giving more power into the soundscape than trying to act like they mean something (especially when you're singing about singing random thing :P).
Let's keep it short, I simply don't see anything needing to be fixed here. A full 10/10 and a five.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.