I tend to disagree with the below comment.
I really like the dream feel of this. It would've been awesome if you had built on it just a bit more, but I really like this for a menu screen. It's got that air of simplicity... I dunno I just like it. ^_^
Its too melodized, sounds like a dream, it really doesn't give me that "I like it so much" feeling. Good Job though :D
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