First minute is disappointing
After that however, it starts to sound very catchy.
I'm not sure why it sounds like that for over a minute, but if you did the rest of your song like everything after 1 minute I'd rate it much higher.
It's how I like to mix stuff.
It needs a melody
I'm no expert in making trance music, but I do know what good music sounds like. First of all, Your song needs a key melody which is catchy, this builds up with a rythim or what many call a "beat". Try listening to some cool drum patterns then try to combine those beats with melody and sound that builds. As I said, I am no expert but I'm pretty dayam sure this will signifigantly improve what you have here
or one cheep suggestion, listen to the music you LIKE and try to immitate what they do. This commonly works in many mediums of art including martial arts :3
. Good luck.
I'm not really sure if you even heard 40 seconds of this O.O