Well, what I can say, that this is really a good techno I can bounce to :)
Surprising, yes that it has such a low score - but I think it's that it has some minor notes and the tempo is a little slow for techno.
NGers are EXTREMELY picky and will rate 0 at the sight of something not Epix ParagonX9 LOLZ
Niiice touch around 2 mins - though I thought my computer broke! xDD
EQ'ing and mixing was done perfectly I think - though I know the start is probably supposed to be quieter, I think it was too quiet - because I turned my speakers up and was like wooahhh at 0:33
Nice bass too - was real funkay :)
There isn't much of a tune in this one, and as it progresses you don't introduce new melodies to heighten the interest of the listener. It sounds at there were some, but they weren't consistent enough and didn't differ that much. this probably ties to point 2 because I noticed on the second playthrough you had a nice lead playing "da, da doo" :P [scat ftw]
Some instruments were a little hard to hear, and In my opinion should of been higher in volume.
there is basically 1 or 2 chords progressions throughout the song - whilst it is good that your song progresses in instruments, this repetition makes the song less interesting to listen to. Another section would be nice, and then the user can recognise the chorus when you go back in!
Some notes seemed to clash near the end, and thats about it!
I really liked this one because it was quite happy and I was rocking my head to this review :P nice professional sound and good quality in your song
just a few suggestions - though they are only small, now have a nice day :D
My best review yet, thanks so much for so many suggestions, I wish more people would review like you.