awesome

could hear this in some kind of dark night club

Alright...

Could be a bit longer :\

bored, ehh

if so continue to be, so stuff like this can come. but this sounds more of a foundation for a song keep building off of this. make it longer

agree with devil401

You could have made something great here, but its simply not long enough. There's so many ways you could have built off of this to make it an epic full-length song. That being said, its still pretty solid.

Hell ya

I luv the fukin bass bro