Not too sure if this deserved a low 6, but he is right. It is kind of monotonous. The beat is a little weak as well, and there isn't much for change up. (Which isn't horrible, most of my stuff is ultra repetitive, so no worries there if that's what you like ;) )
I don't know how long you have been doing music either, but this is not horrible, and a noob definitely would not be making music of this quality. (compliment.) I would suggest NOT flooding the song with so many effects, usually I am screaming to crank the effects, but in this case, it kills the drums and background synths. I think you need to do some work on mastering ;)
Good job ^_^!
Thanks for the advice :D
And yeah, I had some trouble mastering it, I'm working on it right now actually XD As for the effects I may try taking the global flanger I used XD
how should i put this
it's boring. it sounds too monotone, even though there are different sounds, they all blend together makind it sound a bit mono. Maybe spice it up abit, shorten it, or even see if you can change one or two of the sounds or how they come it. There is alot that you can do to spice up this song, but yet, all that really rest upon you. It can be a good song, and i see the potentail of this becoming a great song, but. . .right now it doesn't have it yet. still good work.
Hm, I see what you mean, it might be because I used the same soft synth for each of the sounds. I'll see what I can do with it.