people rate things low because it doesn't sound like things they expect them to sound like, they compare them to piano solos, pop and trance. Great job on the intro, lots of variation and melody is wonderful :3
natural music becomes more and more a singularity, we will find it back soon
You have a pretty good melody going right there. Very nice and smooth, not hard on the ears. It could really go somewhere.
Also, I do not understand why this song is rated so low. It might not be the perfect song, but it's not nearly that bad.
Good luck with the girl! :)
ho don't care that much notations
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.