so... used... to the... old one.... lol. Personally I liked the old one better. So a lot of my comments will probably be biased because of that lol.
I think it's too slow. It has a bubbly feeling under lying with the swing time. To make it feel slwoer you should have taken out a few beats. Like instead of having the kcik on every beat, have it on 1 and 3 instead and have the "snare" on only 2 or 4 not both. That will immediately slow down the feeling. Maybe even dropping the tempo more. But beats realy need to be dropped from the melody line and drums to make it feel slower.
But like i said, I liked the Old Song better lol. So I rtied to be as unbiasd as i could. I think i failed rofl.
Keep it REaL,
this song is..awesome
your an profi O.o
I hope your gonna make more =D
Just when I thought I wouldn't get any good comments on this song, and then I read yours...