It wasnt entirely bad...
But I do agree with what NiDeCo said...just fix it up and then the other guy can eat his words ;)
Try harder next time!
You Suck at making songs. Stop MAking them.
Damn, sorry to say this, but I wanted to throw my headphones against the wall when the song started >_<
It's o.k... sortof. Try to be more diverse. i.e.leave the main theme for a moment and then jump into the original theme again later.
Just a suggestion.
Also, try to have more then one sound playing. Also more sounds that support the melody or vary the melody would be nice.
Like the sounds that begins at 0:54 and stops at 1:08
Good luck ;)
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