I like the idea, but I think it might benefit you to get some reference on this one. The piano sounds a bit midi-ish, and you might be able to download some sound samples or something that might reduce that feel. The drums could be filtered out slightly more, to give that relaxing feel. And the tempo could get a bit slower.
That said, sounds good.
Now for the aforementioned reference that reminds me a lot of this piece. I know it may not immediately seem similar to this song, but it does have some key similarities that you can ponder about, especially in the beginning. And you can get some of what I was talking about with the drums. :)
Tipper - Ever Decreasing Circles
And may you ever find improvement in all that you do. I enjoyed this and see a lot of opportunity.
Haha, thanks for the review, although I made this two years ago :P
I've improved quite a lot :P
It certainly has some sweet harmony, my respects
men, could you let me take this song for a school project? D:
it would be at the begining of the project, even before than the animation itself Dx
the worst that could happen is for them to actually put it on internet, so I will put a link yo this song in the video, I can use the one of newgrounds, but if you got another webpage, please tell me D:
supossing you do give me the chance to take this piece for my project xDD
(it's just sort of a comic book, they want me to animate it, and these piece happens to get the feeling of the story Dx)
Of course you can :D
if you could send me the link, it would be awesome
thanks for the review!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.