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I dunno what to think about this one. I like some of it, and I don't at the same time. Its a genre I don't really do much. so it's a bit strange.

And at the end I put an obligitary heavy bit.

Anyway, this is super rough, it'll probably go through HEAPS of change. The mixing definitely needs revisiting at some point.

Anyway, I need some constructive critisism on this, so by all means, review and tell me what you think.

Hope you like :3


Notation = Good; Instrumentation = (?)

I feel like this belongs in an episode of House. What I'd actually suggest is changing the instruments you're using for the opening lead... sounds like a sort of lame brass synth. The other synth that comes in at 00:34 just doesn't sound all that great either.

The atmosphere you're posing here is quite nice and the notation is superb, but I just feel those instruments chosen contrast it too much. Just an experimental suggestion, try seeing if making the drums at 2:00 hollow sounding like in the intro... maybe it'll sound badass. I dunno. Just a thought.

But yea, that's about as constructive as I can get at this point...

AdventureBiscuit responds:

Thanks man.

Yeah, I never thought the instruments really fitted together, but every time I tried to change it, I would end up ruining it. I probably didn't try hard enough though.

Thanks for actually bothering to suggest ways to improve it; you know what most people are like on newgrounds.

And House music is pretty cool. I'm flattered :D

Thanks again, man.

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3.23 / 5.00

Apr 18, 2010
11:04 PM EDT
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3.3 MB
3 min 37 sec

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