Nice one mate
Some small criteria:
- Maybe some more melodic elements for your climax
- Buildup could be better
- Try some percussion elements, it gives Trance projects a lot of colour and a better vibe.
Hope to hear some more in the future of your projects ^_^. Not bad though for someone that made it in a few hours. Respect!
I liked it
It could improve but its definately got a good beat to it.