Damnit
I hate it when you leave your song overnight and you come back the next day with no reviews on it! >:(.
Anyways, this would actually have been reallly good if the vocals didn't sound so Mr Roboto'ish; the words are pretty unclear unless you read the description. Would have been great as a real voice. Also, I love the melo at 1:42. I like the breakdown at 5:14 ^^.
A few issues. The main melody is pretty repetitive. A bit too repetitive for 6:54 if you ask me =\.
A bit foggy now, getting late. Have fun on your next project, which I'm putting a lot of faith into, so make it good :D.