dude i am gonna play this the whole day during class (ima annoy tha teacha :) )
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Ahaha, I've been listening to this on loop a fair few times now. Damn, you gots yourself a catchy track, actually ended up downloading this one.
Anyway, the actual track: I thought the beginning was a little abrupt for all of half a second until all the synths came back in again. It might just be my computer, but the loop didn't seem to be as smooth as it could be? Like, I thought that that beginning chord might've been placed there 'cause it would link well with the end, thus making a loop, but the end seemed to stay faded out a little too long to loop properly. But again, maybe it's my computer.
The main melody's nice and strong; I was kind of in two minds about the synth, at points I thought the sound of it could have been a little smoother than it was, especially on the higher note at 0:08...this remedies itself when you add in more synths at 0:15ish and have some really awesome harmonies going on by 0:24. Definitely thought the harmony was a real strong point of this.
I think in general, I preferred the second half of this to the first, just because the bass line got more complex, there was a lot more depth given by the synths...as if the first half was the first verse leading into the main chorus.
But overall, I can't really fault this. Nice lead synth, cool bassline, some really nice drum beats and fills...and it's catchy as hell. What more do you want?
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This is a pretty good song, very short, but you made a great job in this 30 seconds... I liked it because it's short and powerful, I liked the feeling it has, it'd work really well as a ringtone or an alarm, since it's pretty loud and gives you energy.
I don't have too much to say, I just wanna say that you could make a full version of it, it'd look better, and w/ more variations, it'd be great!! Keep it up w/ the good work, man!
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-The lead progression is way too loud and brash on the ears. I'm not saying that it's a bad thing but it gets annoying after a couple of times. Which makes what Shellac said so true. It would work better as an annoying alarm to wake you up rather than an actual ringtone. If you ever do make it into a full song make it a little less loud.
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It would work better as an alarm!
It would irritate me so much that I'd want to get up and turn it off as soon as possible! Big, brash lead line with lotsa bass and lotsa drums. There's a clear melody, a few interesting drum fills and sweeps and some cool arpeggios... Very good as a ring tone.
I would like to hear it when you do make it a full song and I'll probably mark it higher when it has more dynamics and maybe a less annoying lead sound.
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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.