It does remind of the original song, but if you try doing this without the midi samples, but creating your own real-instrumental samples that sound just as the original, then this would be good.
It's true that it is indeed repetitive and a little noisy, tho, I mean, the idea is good, but the final outcome isn't... not an expert here, but hope my opinion helped.
Not really doing it
The experiment is an interesting idea, but the result is repetitive and it doesn't feel, sound, or bring to mind the original song outside the Indigo Plateau. If you still want to work with this I suggest that you use more, longer, and more recognizable parts of the song. Well, that is if you want your song to remain faithful to the original, if not, just make the song less repetitive and give it some more melody. Hope this helps, keep up the good work!