The melody is very, very dissonant, not to mention the fact that this song is very repetitive.
well its techhno its supose to be repetative
There is something about this song that doesn't sound right in it, if you change the beat a little bit; it sounds a bit negative; is that what your going for? Sorry dude, I don't like it.
Overall I'm not a fan of this one, although some other songs you've made are pretty good. Very repetitive, the whole song sounds the same.
thanks for listening to all my songs but this one is a techno song and im still new to this check out base and clap its my new one out im just about to upload it