well done!

i love this. it needs to be mixed a little better, the vocals could be a tad bit clearer without sacrificing their ambience, try taking a little reverb off of them or add another vocal track dry without effect and mix the levels. the chimes are awesome, but a little overpowering at the volume you have them. i like the brightness of the song. great job! this song has potential, do it justice!

4/5 9/10