Pretty nice techno song you have here
You have a good start here...my biggest issue is that the bass doesn't come in till later, so it feels hollow before that. And when the bass comes in it drowns out the drum track. Just go back and play around with the levels and you'll have a much better output. Also, that chimey sounding synth in the back is a bit distracting, I'd say either remove it and put in a harmony lead...I mean I love it in the beginning, but it doesn't feel right sticking all the way through the song.
I like it, not much to say. I listened to the old one and i can see a real improvement in this one. At around the 30 second mark though, it doesn't seem right. Sure, it sounds fine ...there is just something missing...or not right. Overall pretty good.
thanks man, i'll try to see whats missing with it and thanks for listening.