This is their remix music video game world sonic the hedgehog
It's okay. I think it sounds softer than the song in the back of your mind. Let me get out a couple of pennies.
I'm hearing the guitar in there, but the soft strings just don't fit well with it. I liked it in the beginning, but if it's going to build into a tense battle theme it has to get louder and sharper. That's the emotion in your song, so it needs to get sharper, and sort of "fill" the listener.
The guitar(bass electric, i assume) needs to get stronger and more audible. Also give it a good vibration, you need to SHAKE ME UP, you know? This, I think, is what pumps the listener up, gets them full of energy. So, you need to really reinforce that bass, get the drums louder. It also helps to push the bass and drums closer to unison.
Drums are a tad too loud.
It is GOOD song! :P
no offense, i like your music, but im just not into this type of music THAT much
it is very good no doubt. keep up the awesome work :)
Its interesting, but i heard this on the NG front page and I was like, hmm that style is very familiar. and then i clicked it and it was you. haha
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