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First of all I must say, plendid use of filter effects!
I'm glad you took up my advice. Same as in the energetic melody.
Starts of real interesting. Makes listners want to hear what's going next. You invited them well. Pad is still the same as in the demo, I asked for another. Or layer it with a fuller less dramatic pad. Though it suits, but it needs to be unleashed.
Good transitioning. Beat sticks on the same pattern though.
The Beat itself could use some more variation. Try making breaks in for the effect. And fill those breaks with fatt bass.
Loved the new melody, though you used it perhaps yet to early. For my feeling it doesn't suits there. At 2:01 it certainly does! Made it real nice as it progresses!
The thing I mentioned you performed perfectly!
Those breaks with the beat, needs to be used earlier. Make diffrent patterns.
Variation is the key. Loved the reverse kicks in it too. Trumpet/pluck worked fine.
Envloped nicely, and filtered good. Kinda basic ending. Could use some more spice.
As far it goes for the mixing, you deffinately start doing that!
Makes the track more fuller and richer. It feels rather unclear sometimes.
It needs that little touch bro.
Good improved version of your demo.
Other than mixing it right. You're way to go!
Keep it up!