Nice Loop Man
The overall concept is nice. However, your chord transition at 5 seconds or so is too sharp or abrupt. A little less attack on on the synth and some more release would be a good idea. The chords or notes should blend into each other. The underlying bass could have used a much slower build and could be more subtle in the mix.
So far it's a good idea.
The other problem I have is that the tones are light and airy, then darker, which the baseline confirms but then it switches a less dark tone again. What are you trying to say, or where are you trying to go with the track? What do you wish to convey?
Thanks. I'll use this information to help improve my next song!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.