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Atmospheric music.

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Author Comments

This is one of my first songs that I made. It's short and a decent loop for an atmospheric movie, or a scary intro!

I don't expect 10 star reviews but I do expect criticism to help me improve my music abilities.

I'll be using this in a future short film.


Nice Loop Man

Nicely done.

Needs work

The overall concept is nice. However, your chord transition at 5 seconds or so is too sharp or abrupt. A little less attack on on the synth and some more release would be a good idea. The chords or notes should blend into each other. The underlying bass could have used a much slower build and could be more subtle in the mix.

So far it's a good idea.

The other problem I have is that the tones are light and airy, then darker, which the baseline confirms but then it switches a less dark tone again. What are you trying to say, or where are you trying to go with the track? What do you wish to convey?

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dj-elmosyous responds:

Thanks. I'll use this information to help improve my next song!

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Credits & Info

2.50 / 5.00

Apr 13, 2010
6:08 PM EDT
File Info
962.6 KB
25 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.