hmmm...

the ryhtm is bad

Ehh

I didnt like man, sorry, I ended fast fowarding it about 30 sec into the song and noticed it repeats over and over basically, Gave it a good title though.

I'm sorry but...

I'm sorry but I had to zero vote this. Honestly this is hardly even a song. Granted it has musical value to it, but you used to separate drum loops at once and their tempos didn't even line up. None of your samples were original. This really sounded like you just took a bunch of things and put them together rather than doing something a little more original; you used pieces of other people's imagination rather than mostly using your own. Granted samples are great, but try to find ways to tweak them to make them your own.

However, don't get discouraged by this review...I know that you aren't proficient in FL yet, but keep trying and you will eventually figure it out. This track is just another step in getting there.