Not bad at all, through I don't like the laughs that you added, the rest of the song is quite well mixed and the other touches you added fit in very well.
Super Smash Bros. Brawl needs to update just to add this song. Great work!
I'm honored with that statement, dude. Thanks for the feedback, glad you enjoyed it :)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.