I liked the lyrics
Your flow was off but it was actually more on then in other tracks I've heard you on...
I like this. I don't know why everyone else is giving such low reviews. Everybody got their own style. smh. Appreciate love, nevermind hate. Keep it up dude!
You Could Work On Your Timing And Flow A Little
And I Mean, Yeah Your Spittin,
But Your Not Really Saying Anything
Maybe Work On Verse Content Instead Of Just Trying To Find New Ways Of Spittin Insults.
if you can time your end rhymes a little bit more precisely this could be legendary. Wheres your new stuff man?
I agree with Yumbo-yak the beat was ass lol no offense to whoever made it :D
But that first line is just eewwww. "Needle combats ya feeble attacks filled with crap" nasty that was nice. You shouldaa kept going with that bro but it's all good.
lol word, i dno it was fun for me so w.e=)