That was really good. I didn't know what to expect. Did you look at any tutorials? I think that it would be a perfect 10 if you were to make more of a transition at 1 minute 40 seconds. Like say for instance, the same sound as the melody that comes in, but for the transition have two somewhat fast lowered pitch notes at the same pitch, and the one note that is somewhat higher pitched than those two and is sustained a little longer.
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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.