It's prety good, but it needs more central melody. Otherwise it's very good :)
Thanks for the review!
It is recognizable but instead of making the "words" such a low tone making them higher would make them stand out a little better. This is a really good job. :D
Thanks for the review but if it was a really good job then why did I only get a 5/10
I'll try making them more high pitched next time.
So good effort and don't take this the wrong way ok? I give you major credit for creating this at all. So...
With this song, it needs vocals. Or at least more of the central melody, this isn't very recognizable at all. It also needs to be longer.
I don't take it the wrong way I love constructive criticism. I couldn't find any vocals anywhere and I didn't want to use the shitty speech synthesizer on FL. I might revisit. Thanks!
note: havent heard the original
i think it sounds good, just in my opinion it needs more bass, i havent heard the original song so dont take me too serious, ^_^ (sorry bad english)
I'm sure if you heard the original you wouldn't have given an 8 lol Thanks for the review dude.
It's ok but want it to be longer :)
Yeah it's not one of my best I'll try to make it better.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.