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She's Gone

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not the full song....something my friend and i are working on.

he made the beat...i provided some quick vocals in about 15 minutes too see how it all sounded. hopefully we can finish this for a mixtape we are working on before i get out high school.

but enjoy none the less!

sample- Bill Withers - Ain't No Sunshine

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Shit.

Hey, finish this shit. My ex just destroyed my heart, and this is nice. Great voice for this btw.

Wow!! 10/10!!

Niceeee :)

It is really good! 10/10

Make it longer please?
I would have a complete two sentences from the refrain in there: Ain't no sunshine when she is gone ain't no war when she is away.
And add a same size verse after that then repeat the refrain again Bridge to last refrein and end with repeat refrein.
Then it is a solid complete song and shit i would buy this if it was in a store!

10/10 5/5

Nice

Hey hit me up we can make a track or two nice vocals

Wurd

It sounds good, solid quality. I'd work on a more diverse rhyme scheme and cadence though. More internal rhymes!!

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aliasf
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Apr 9, 2010
1:25 PM EDT
Genre
Hip Hop - Olskool
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44 sec

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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.