Not too shabby = )
This is fairly nice. Not much to really say, it gets slightly repetitive is one problem, the only other problem I see is that the strings you use (i mean like orchestrated stings, not guitar like ones...I mean to say the ones that first get shown in the beginning) seem to be a little dark for the piece, or even a little too epic. Orchestra might have needed a not so...heavenly gospel feel to them as well...maybe need to be more like a bouncey-type choir..(if you know what I mean..not a AHHHHH type of choir, but a booop...or something kind..
Nice if your just reading a book or something like the guy before me wrote.
Overall not too bad (just keep in mind that my ratings are in comparison to some of the legends and greats on NG, so your actually pretty dang good).
I'd like to hear maybe one more song like this out of you, to see how it goes.
Sometimes it's hard to make something not repetitive, especially when you are limited in ability or programs. I'm getting better, no?
More of a coffee shop mood then house
It's ok but it has a vibe like when you get into a calm coffee shop and wank to read your book and sip on you caffe latte. Very nice nun-the-less but should be contemperary not HOUSE
honestly, I don't know the difference too much when it comes to genre. I don't listen to this sort of music personally, I just like to come up with this stuff, use some of my basic music theory.