Pretty good, yo!
The melodies are alright. And I totally see where Owl City can be related. Very good! I think it's good, a little repetitive (Hence the 7), but yeah. I'd love to hear you produce more Owl City-esque music. :D
nice one man, i'm sure this song would make her happy, i made a song for a girl i'm in love with, and things are going well now :)
all i can say is, good song, and best of luck
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.