Wow. This is very unique! You busted 100% originality... lol. This is good. Just too repetetive, if you would have added a chorus line to it, sum beat drops, it would be great for a spit. Nice instrumental work. Overall a nice soft jam. You should remix it. :)
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that was too short grasshopper, one must loop their stuff more often for optimal effect for that was a song worthy of more than 30 seconds, i like the mellow atmosphere you created in the song, one such as myself could definitely rap to this beat and one such as myself thinks he shall, for this beat influences my potential as a warrior hwa-tahh!!
if you're interested sometime i'd like to work on some music, you have much talent in the art making of the beats my son, definitely make this beat longer, and you shall prosper, peace and respect my fellow musician