Iz not bad :)
Your right! it does have some potential!
but drum beats or whatever it is, that has an "off" tone instead of a defined beat is not a good friend to music, unless the tone harmonises or goes with the tune or Melody.
Its a good song, but it does lack a Build up and a Climax! try to use what you have there, and make it slowly build up to something and then Bust it out with a mad beat and melody and youll have a really great song!!! Keep at it! youll get there VERY soon!