Please - your comments and critiques are VERY welcome. Any feedback I can get is useful and desired - so long as it's relatively constructive, anyway.
This track uses some interestin effects regarding gates and some other FX applied over the notes.
This track makes me feel - adventerous... in a very tense manner - it's kind of interesting really.
I'm not sure I can write a story for this right now - unfortunately, I'm just not feeling particularly creative in the writing department at the moment - so if you were looking for one, I'm sorry - I had enough trouble just coming up with the name.
Perhaps I will write one later?
That said - Singularity.
Hrm - It does make me think of stars and warp holes. Perhaps that is what it will be about?
The start filled me with anticipation.
-the start is a bit long, the drums don't make it feel worthwhile enough to hear the same melody again.
-It feels a whole lot like one big intro, building up for something that never really came. It just stayed static, which was a bit of a turn off.
Other than that, the song was good. Nothing I'd download but I think it's five-worthy.
thanks!
as the song goes
-intro seems to lack substance
-intro drags on
-seems a bit repetitive (which all of us tend to do, so not as big a deal)
-don't really like the main sound used, gets a bit annoying
-random beeps don't fit too well
-use reverb/if you did, bring it out a bit more.
-melody change at 2:37 is needed, but lacks as much substance as the beginning
-i like what you have going on in the background, it sounds good.
-from what you alread have, the outro was good too.
overall:
it has potential. you could really go somewhere with this. I just feel it's really lacking a lot of substance. it seems quite bland right now. it just needs more to it
what i would do:
change the lead sound. it's just annoying to listen to for the most part. Add a deeper kick. bring that out more. put more melody changes in there, but not too many where it becomes ADD style. definitely add/bring out that reverb more. it really helps. possibly shorten the song too. there isn't enough going on to keep people interested for four and a half minutes.
-intro seems to lack substance/-intro drags on
Valid. I can see what you mean. Not sure how on earth I'm gong to rectify that in the future. I'll figure something out - just keep plugging at it, i suppose.
-seems a bit repetitive (which all of us tend to do, so not as big a deal)
Ha - yeah - I guess that is a common issue =)
-don't really like the main sound used, gets a bit annoying
Hrm - I can see how that would begin to get grating - It's my own music - so I'm rather partial to it - but that doesn't mean that other people will like it.
-random beeps don't fit too well
I think that you're referring to the glitch section - and you're probably right.
-use reverb/if you did, bring it out a bit more.
Can do - thanks for the hint.
-melody change at 2:37 is needed, but lacks as much substance as the beginning
Valid - don't really know how to resolve that though. back to the first response.
-i like what you have going on in the background, it sounds good./-from what you alread have, the outro was good too.
Thanks! At least there's some positive there, right? =)
Thank you for taking the time to review this - I really appreciate it - and I also really appreciate the thought you put into your review - that's really helpful. You've provided quite a bit of insight into a couple of issues there, and I can now look out for those pitfalls in the future.
Changing the lead isn't challenging - I'm also getting kinda tired of it myself.
I'll work on re-writing the track - and kicking up the bass of it too.
I think I also have an issue when it comes to the length of the tracks - I don't know where it comes from, but I don't feel that anyting under three minutes is worth it.
Thank you.
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meh
see my review of dawn http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/324046
pretty much the same as of review content wise
I see the video game genre might be wise to change to - and i agree with that. Changing the genre of this one as well.
Thanks for the response - I left a far more detailed response to your other one - and I think it applies here as well.
Thanks again,
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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
Viros 
