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my first looop

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OMG! I finally made a song!
No. Its a loop :(

I did this in about 45 minutes, and this is the first time I have even ATTEMPTED to make a song. I know that I only used presets to make it, but that's because I don't know how to do make other noises with FL 9...

Please rate, review, etc...
(Please be nice, this is my first song *loop* that I have made!)

~B23

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Over 9000 times better than my first attempt.

I really like what you came up with the first time. I can see you have already got the hang of FL 9 (stuck with FL 8 over here -___-). Good use of presets to make a song, although in the future I am sure you will come up with plenty of original stuff.

You have everything you need. You know what goes into a goo track. Just keep making them songs!

Thanks for the fav on my latest submission as well!!!

You have Potential

Some improvements:
- The way you push the airy effect from left headphone to right headphone is actually quite annoying.
- Add some bass.
- Slightly lower the volume of the effect @ 0:12-0:14, it's quite loud and suprises me as a cause of that.
- This may not be necessary, but to make the song sound better (or worse, it depends), put Maximus on the master channel instead of fruity limiter and mess around with the presets that Maximus has (presets in top left corner arrow of maximus window).

Other than that, this is really good for your first song. I love that transition effect @ from 0:12-0:14; I've actually used it in one of my songs before.

P.S. this song would fit into the genre of either "trance" or "house" because it's chill trance/ chill house. So I'd just put it in trance if I were you.

8/10
4/5
~DjDO~

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Berkley233
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Uploaded
Apr 5, 2010
12:33 AM EDT
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1.7 MB
1 min 3 sec

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