Needs remastering :o
The sounds you used are very unique, and create a really unique trance style. It starts out with an awesome, slow, nice, and steady buildup that keeps me listening for more. Then you bring in the rave at around the one minute mark. The only thing I see wrong is that at that point, it needs a bit of remastering. Its far to loud, glitchy, and the sounds jamble together like a shitstorm. :(
It starts out wonderful, just turn down the volume for the pads, alter the instruments a little, and this song will be A WHOLE lot better.