u should use differtent kicks bro ....oldschool kicks arent as gud now ...but nice piano work tho i like :)..
well aside from the fact i love piano melodies and piano infused songs this just didnt do it the cheesy kick didnt really help the dong it couldve done without it and the echo, ohgod the echo its horrible. tune it down on the low ones or just take t out completely the song would be a lot better i cant pick out a distinct melody so im gonna give you a 5 for the effort
waaaay too much echo
Tone down that echo man, its not a good thing for low sounds, and it's especially bad if you use it on too many things. I think if you got rid of the echo, this song would suddenly sound a lot better. Doesn't really sound classical so you may want to change the genre, as this is more electronic sounding.
At 2 mins, when you add in the new bass, it doesn't fit because the rest stays the same with it finally in there, thus making it sound out of place. Either bring it in sooner, or change things up.
Also, the song is overly repetitive and could use more variation with the piano which shouldn't have repeated the same stuff over and over and over again.
So yeah, you may want to rethink the effects you used, and maybe consider this of a different genre. If you work on this some more, it will sound good, but for now, I just can't really get into it as there's too much wrong with it.