I didn't like that scratchy bass sound you had, but the floaty synths were really awesome. So was the groove. I think you whould work on those bass instruments a little bit..It didn't go well with it at all.
My favorite part was the melody kicked in at 2 minutes. it lasted for a little bit and then came to a brick wall with that dang bass sound again. I think you should have kept it going more.
Haha. Matters of preference. I didn't really like the synth chords much. I loved the bass! Oh well, I don't have the time or patience to search through or for new samples, and I've honestly used up every single one in my current music utility (over 300 mixes)...
'til I get some money together for this passionate hobby of mine, my mixes are always gonna' have that "one thing" wrong with them, at least.
What I might try doing is filtering the bass so that it phases. It'll be less forward that way.
Thanks a bizunch for the review! :)