The only point in which I have a little something to say is the end. It's like it's cutting right in the middle of a move which is a little uhn "frustrating" in a way. It's not like finishing abruptly on a note is bad, quite contrary and I tend to like/do this. But not so straight. Maybe you could try like some echo or something to make the end more soft.
But on the rest of it good timing, nice principal melody and coherent in the global.
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